The Wonder Wall celebrates the children's achievements by publishing their work in an online space for the whole school community to view and follow. These articles have all been generated by the many and delightful visits that I receive from our young learners. Join me in congratulating them on their achievements.
Monday, 6 February 2012
Descriptive writing about a frozen landscape
S has written a description of a frozen landscape. Here is some of her writing...
Gigantic mountains covered with snow was reflecting into brightly gleaming water while the smell of lovely flowers was in the air. Trees are smelling like lovely mint. Laying quietly the river is freezing like ice lollies frozen.
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